The major problem with this is that I always feel I must use more words than necessary. It's been ingrained so much that I experience conviction if the writing isn't long enough. Though I'd prefer to learn to write, speak, and communicate more effectively. So be it. Gift 62 is an active attempt to use fewer words than necessary. For writing I've already found a great tip:
"Substitute 'damn' every time you're inclined to write 'very;' your editor will delete it and the writing will be just as it should be."Now I just need a strategy for speaking. I'm a natural rambler once I get going. Hmm... this may more effort than anticipated. Suggestions?
— Mark Twain
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I read that quote to my mom when she was writing the obituary for my grandmother. She needed to pare down her words because every word cost money! I noticed she had a lot of "very"s in there, so I read it to her, replacing them with "damn." Somehow, saying that grandma was "damn involved in church" just didn't seem right (it was hysterical, though). :)
Jenn
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